Step 1
What is Juhu
Asem Kanas?
How familiar of " Juhu Asem Kanas" is for people in Central Kalimantan?
Why do you think " Juhu Asem Kanas" is so popular?
How step to make " Juhu Asem Kanas" ?
Step 2
Topic Sentence : Juhu Asem Kanas is one of a traditional foods in Central Kalimantan
Supporting Sentence : It is usually blend pineapple, long beans, cassava, parrot fish and seasons. It look familiar if someone try to enjoy the taste. Juhu Asem Kanas many people like it. Because texture and sauce Juhu Asem Kanas is very delicious.
Concluding Sentence : In conclusion, Juhu Asem Kanas is delicious and favourite food in Central Kalimantan.
Step 3
Fisrt Draft
" Juhu Asem Kanas"
Juhu Asem Kanas
is one of a traditional foods in Central Kalimantan. It is usually
blend pineapple, long beans, cassava, parrot fish and seasons. It look familiar
if someone try to enjoy the taste. Juhu Asem Kanas many people like it. Because
texture and sauce Juhu Asem Kanas is
very delicious. I want to share about how to make Juhu Asem Kanas ? First, boil
water until boiling, cassava input until mature. Second, pineapple input with
seasoning which are already in grind. Next, parrot fish input and wait until
boiling. Finally, long beans input which are already in pieces and ready to
serve. In conclusion, Juhu Asem Kanas is delicious and favourite food in
Central Kalimantan.
please add the unfamiliar words and focus on the structure in your paragraph.
BalasHapusYour second sentence looks like strange, because there are no supporting sentence. why don't you make it one with the step how to make it. Make a new major supporting sentence and add the information about what the ingredients and how to make it.
BalasHapus"Juhu Asem Kanas many people like it" try this one "Many people like this food" it is more understandable.
"Because texture and sauce Juhu Asem Kanas is very delicious" to be "The food is very delicious with unique sauce and great texture"
I think you must change the third sentence to make unity and make the sentences easy to understand.
BalasHapusYou can combine sentences Like, the fourth sentence and the five. became “ many people likes Juhu Asem kanas, because the texture and sauce is very delicious”.