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What is Juhu Asem Kanas?

Juhu Asem Kanas is one of a traditional foods in Central Kalimantan. It is usually blend pineapple, long beans, menggala, nila fish and seasons.  The food is very delicious with unique sauce and great texture. And many people like this food. I want to share about how to make Juhu Asem Kanas ? First, boil water until boiling, sliced menggala and then menggala input until ripe. Second, pineapple input with seasoning which are already in grind. Next, nila fish input and wait until boiling. Finally, long beans input which are already in pieces and ready to serve. In conclusion, Juhu Asem Kanas is favourite and delicious food in Central Kalimantan.

Blend : Mixed

Menggala : Cassava 
Sliced : Cut

Ripe : Cooked

In grind : in the ulek

Pieces : Cut

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What is Juhu Asem Kanas?

How familiar of " Juhu Asem Kanas" is for people in Central Kalimantan?

Why do you think " Juhu Asem Kanas" is so popular?

How step to make " Juhu Asem Kanas" ?

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Topic Sentence : Juhu Asem Kanas is one of a traditional foods in Central Kalimantan

Supporting Sentence : It is usually blend pineapple, long beans, cassava, parrot fish and seasons. It look familiar if someone try to enjoy the taste. Juhu Asem Kanas many people like it. Because  texture and sauce Juhu Asem Kanas is very delicious.

Concluding Sentence : In conclusion, Juhu Asem Kanas is delicious and favourite food in Central Kalimantan.

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" Juhu Asem Kanas"

Juhu Asem Kanas is one of a traditional foods in Central Kalimantan. It is usually blend pineapple, long beans, cassava, parrot fish and seasons. It look familiar if someone try to enjoy the taste. Juhu Asem Kanas many people like it. Because  texture and sauce Juhu Asem Kanas is very delicious. I want to share about how to make Juhu Asem Kanas ? First, boil water until boiling, cassava input until mature. Second, pineapple input with seasoning which are already in grind. Next, parrot fish input and wait until boiling. Finally, long beans input which are already in pieces and ready to serve. In conclusion, Juhu Asem Kanas is delicious and favourite food in Central Kalimantan.

Revised EFL Writing 2 Class

Tanjung Puting National Park

One of the places to visit in Central Kalimantan is Tanjung Puting National Park. It has some of the most interest places, there are: You will see the Orang Utans a lot of ex captive Orang Utans rehabilitation in the park. The romantic forest, river and atmosphere of the park are also offer different experiences especially for those who want to have an adventurous honeymoon. In there, many flora and fauna. There are Ramin, Jelatung, Kayu besi, Meranti and Keruing. Furthermore, the species fauna are Orang Utan, Proboscis Monkeys, Grey Gibbon and Malayan Sun Bear. Places to visit there: Camp Leakey, Tanjung Harapan and Pondok Tanguy. In conclusion, Tanjung Puting National Park is interesting and beautiful places to visit in Central Kalimantan.